Editing Grammar of Inquiries

Hey guys! I'm back again. Today I want to tell you about the editing grammar on my inquires Reflection. This is it, the reflection with full of mistake grammar and verb. 

"Welcome to my learning study of adjective. This video might useful for you guys to understand more about adjective with example learning. So, this is the result of what I've been through to 1 term.

Adjective is a word that describe noun. I'm using mac apps for making this video : GarageBand for making background beats, I-movie for editing the movie and making the movie to my own video. My example of tell you guys using a movie video of top singer movie video. I know you guys must be familiar with Justine Bieber. He is a young top singer and he was one of the artist in youtube. The movie of Justine Bieber that I took was " Somebody to love - JB feat Usher"

First that come out to my mine about this work was seem boring but I learn something that the M.V music sound can be taken out and only a video inside without a music, but because I take long time for editing the movie for 2 days and its made me boring for a day but going on its getting interest and more fun. This part of making beats is one of the favorite part of this. It just letting me know that Garage band have a great beats, sound effects and background.

I hope by using a top model singer you guys more understand whats my point of using that. its looks simple easy but it was the hard part because my mac always get quit by itself, so I should repeating the same thing for 3 times.

My question just a brief one to make me more better in next project. Do you guys think that my video project better or detail enough? please comment and I will accept it bad or good. Thanks"

For me after 6 week study of part of speech and a week of study grammar. when I saw this reflection I feel like embarrass that "Did I really do and type this kind of grammar" so I made a editing.

This is the result after I do the editing..

 " Welcome to my learning study of adjectives. This video might useful for you guys to understand more about adjective with example learning. This is the result of what I've been through to 1 term.

Adjective is a word that describe noun. I'm using mac apps for making this video. I used GarageBand for making background beats, I-movie for editing the movie and making the movie to my own video. I want to tell you guys about adjectives by using a movie video of top singer movie video. I know you guys must be familiar with Justine Bieber. He is a young top singer and he was one of the artists in YouTube. The movie of Justin Bieber that I took was " Somebody to love - JB feat Usher"

First that come out to my mine about this work was seem boring but I learn something that the M.V music sound can be taken out and only a video inside without a music. I take long time for editing the movie for 2 days and its made me boring for day but going on its getting interest and more fun. This part of making beats is one of the favorite parts of this. It just letting me knows that Garage band have a great beats, sound effects and background music.

I hope by using a top model singer you guys more understand what’s my point of using that. Its looks simple easy but it was the hard part because my Mac always get quit by itself, so I should repeating the same thing for 3 times.

My question for you guys just a brief one to make me better in next project. Do you guys think that my video project better or detail enough? Please comment and I will accept for any good comment or bad comment. Thanks. "

feel much way better grammar :) thanks and don't forget to leave comment :) 

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