Editing Grammar of Inquiries

Hey guys! I'm back again. Today I want to tell you about the editing grammar on my inquires Reflection. This is it, the reflection with full of mistake grammar and verb. 

"Welcome to my learning study of adjective. This video might useful for you guys to understand more about adjective with example learning. So, this is the result of what I've been through to 1 term.

Adjective is a word that describe noun. I'm using mac apps for making this video : GarageBand for making background beats, I-movie for editing the movie and making the movie to my own video. My example of tell you guys using a movie video of top singer movie video. I know you guys must be familiar with Justine Bieber. He is a young top singer and he was one of the artist in youtube. The movie of Justine Bieber that I took was " Somebody to love - JB feat Usher"

First that come out to my mine about this work was seem boring but I learn something that the M.V music sound can be taken out and only a video inside without a music, but because I take long time for editing the movie for 2 days and its made me boring for a day but going on its getting interest and more fun. This part of making beats is one of the favorite part of this. It just letting me know that Garage band have a great beats, sound effects and background.

I hope by using a top model singer you guys more understand whats my point of using that. its looks simple easy but it was the hard part because my mac always get quit by itself, so I should repeating the same thing for 3 times.

My question just a brief one to make me more better in next project. Do you guys think that my video project better or detail enough? please comment and I will accept it bad or good. Thanks"

For me after 6 week study of part of speech and a week of study grammar. when I saw this reflection I feel like embarrass that "Did I really do and type this kind of grammar" so I made a editing.

This is the result after I do the editing..

 " Welcome to my learning study of adjectives. This video might useful for you guys to understand more about adjective with example learning. This is the result of what I've been through to 1 term.

Adjective is a word that describe noun. I'm using mac apps for making this video. I used GarageBand for making background beats, I-movie for editing the movie and making the movie to my own video. I want to tell you guys about adjectives by using a movie video of top singer movie video. I know you guys must be familiar with Justine Bieber. He is a young top singer and he was one of the artists in YouTube. The movie of Justin Bieber that I took was " Somebody to love - JB feat Usher"

First that come out to my mine about this work was seem boring but I learn something that the M.V music sound can be taken out and only a video inside without a music. I take long time for editing the movie for 2 days and its made me boring for day but going on its getting interest and more fun. This part of making beats is one of the favorite parts of this. It just letting me knows that Garage band have a great beats, sound effects and background music.

I hope by using a top model singer you guys more understand what’s my point of using that. Its looks simple easy but it was the hard part because my Mac always get quit by itself, so I should repeating the same thing for 3 times.

My question for you guys just a brief one to make me better in next project. Do you guys think that my video project better or detail enough? Please comment and I will accept for any good comment or bad comment. Thanks. "

feel much way better grammar :) thanks and don't forget to leave comment :) 

Easy to understand Adverb

This is my last movie of part of speech at ESL now we will moving to Sentences and I will giving and update soon as I done. thanks! :)

ESL Adjective Reflection

Welcome to my learning study of adjective. This video might useful for you guys to understand more about adjective with example learning. So, this is the result of what I've been through to 1 term.
Adjective is a word that describe noun. I'm using mac apps for making this video : GarageBand for making background beats, I-movie for editing the movie and making the movie to my own video. My example of tell you guys using a movie video of top singer movie video. I know you guys must be familiar with Justine Bieber. He is a young top singer and he was one of the artist in youtube. The movie of Justine Bieber that I took was " Somebody to love - JB feat Usher"

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First that come out to my mine about this work was seem boring but I learn something that the M.V music sound can be taken out and only a video inside without a music, but because I take long time for editing the movie for 2 days and its made me boring for a day but going on its getting interest and more fun. This part of making beats is one of the favorite part of this. It just letting me know that Garage band have a great beats, sound effects and background.
I hope by using a top model singer you guys more understand whats my point of using that. its looks simple easy but it was the hard part because my mac always get quit by itself, so I should repeating the same thing for 3 times.
My question just a brief one to make me more better in next project. Do you guys think that my video project better or detail enough? please comment and I will accept it bad or good. Thanks

Just a short reflection

The first week of Term 3 at sinarmas, ESL teaching us about part of speech, noun and adjective. I think everyone have been know and hear these of words every time in english class. ESL teaching this topic because commonly people just hear without understanding well of the meaning words. Mr. Raisdana helping us to understand by watching movie from Brain Pop.

First way that we learn this by collecting words and research about the meaning and put some list of words. We learn noun, proper noun , compound noun, singular and plural. singular is a words only 1 thing. plural was the opposite one ( two things or more than 1) We list all the words into Google docs (G-Docs) G-docs same thing like Microsoft but the different was it can be share but the problem was sometimes friends can change anything that we type to make joke.

Part of speech is a words with their own meaning and category. It have 8 category are:

1. Verb- action

2. Adverb - describe a verb
3. Noun - thing or person or idea or place.
4. Adjective - describe noun
5. Pronoun -Haven't done yet
6. Conjunction - Haven't done yet :)
7. Preposition- As soon we learn it
8. Interjection Haven't done yet

Brain pop for me personalities was great website because it content all kind of subject and detail information. I feel brain pop can really usefull website so I could learn and find sources easier my looking on their video. Inside the brain pop there have a Quiz to make sure what we have done and how good have we know and learn. checking your knowledge to test the quiz.

Flicks for me personal was great giving picture because it was free and we use in proper way not like stealing other picture, with flicks we won't worry anymore because it just same like google image but this picture easy to find Creative Common to share and to help people. We use Flickr to find picture about noun This all picture we collaborate and mix together and share with classmate so we know more about what is noun with picture and description. So Mr. Raisdana make another G-docs for presentation which is include our picture to share. This my right side of post was picture that I choose which is in category of : compound noun, common and singular. Now this is whole of Presentation by me and my friends in ESL class.

I think now it have been exiting and interesting in this new term of 3. Our product after learning this to teaching to someone what have we done and what we know about this. Our product can be Movie, Presentation or Oral with some picture and list of words. Great time to learn this kind of topic cause its improve our vocabulary and grammar into proper languages.

Why we go to school?

by: Country_boy_shane

Why does every human in this world should go for school? Why they do that tradition for go to school? why don't we just go for home learning? I been curious about this since grade 6, when I start thinking that school are bored. Its just a piece of book that we should memorize and understand, but teachers always tell to the student that have a same curiosity that I have that if you want to be rich or famous even achieve you goals, you must work hard and have good knowledge understanding why. If your study just like playing, Teacher will guarantee that we will not get achieve what we want without a big chance of luck will come to us.

Human are made from god to understand how tough this world and how many time that we have sacrifice for 1 knowledge?  Teacher and my parent always tell to me that the things that everyone can't stole from us is only the brain that full with knowledge, people will hired high for your jobs if you are smart enough. Little kids always want to go to school, and middle school upper does not want to go to school accept something that they really like from school and can't leave that.

The things that I like from school were the friends living and their social network. Sometimes friends story that make me interest can stuck in my mind and make that become knowledge that I kept. School for me sometimes fun in the learning group because I prefer for communicated and socializing. More friends that I have at school, more fun school will be. Maybe in next 6 weeks, Mr. Raisdana can tell me something about the technology hacking?how they can hack?because my friends always get hack by someone and they should start by beginning so I think Mr . Raisdana know how to solve that problem in social network.